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Preview image is the original poem written out at O'Malley's on 4th Ave.

Damn it, Sylvia, next time give me a pencil so it doesn't take me a while to read my own poetry. :P

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:iconcybergranny:
Hehe
I love it :)

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There are no bored people only lazy people
:spank: :spank: :spank: me please :lick:

A BIG THANK TO =psivamp for the cute avatar she made me :grope:
:icondrunken-splice:
:) thanks for the :+fav:

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`poisonedrose - thanks brett <£...ahhh brit love
:iconangelofgod87:
a pencil vs. a pen? .... erm Brett its damned hard to read what you wrote REGARDLESS of pencil or pen...
:giggle:

TTFN
Me
:)

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"I learned a long time ago that one note can go a long way if it's the right one, and it will probably whip the guy with 20 notes." ~ Les Paul
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1 Timothy 4: 12
:icondrunken-splice:
lol, well do you have a comment on the typed text at least?

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`poisonedrose - thanks brett <£...ahhh brit love
:iconcybergranny:
Np

I want to see more ^^

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There are no bored people only lazy people
:spank: :spank: :spank: me please :lick:

A BIG THANK TO =psivamp for the cute avatar she made me :grope:
:iconremylebeua:
To forget would be lovely wouldn't it? Ah, alcohol, thou art the most loyal mistress. lol. Most excellent mate.
:icondrunken-splice:
I'm not sure I would go so far as forget, but clean out the hurt of it. I would like to keep the memories without feeling pain, which is impossible, really. I was just fascinated by acetone as a nail polish remover, and the idea of drinking it straight to remove away her name from all the drinks before that were spent over her.

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Hello Toilet
`poisonedrose - thanks brett <£...ahhh brit love
:iconremylebeua:
I'm suddenly reminded of a cheesy 80's power ballad... "love hurts, love scars"... and thats all I remember. That is something interesting though. How no matter how hard you try, there's always some level of pain. :(
:icondrunken-splice:
:nod: agreed.

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`poisonedrose - thanks brett <£...ahhh brit love

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