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A Pantoum.
Comments I love that you used repeating line and made it fit. Not a lot of people can successfully accomplish that and you did. Gorgeous peace dear
 -- Needled stems induce a scarlet coma with flames to burn the scars. ah, the repeating lines was called for because its a Pantoum. It was hard as shit to write. You ought to try that form
-- Hello Toilet `poisonedrose - thanks brett <£...ahhh brit love If I get the chance I will. I tried a similar style once and it turned out horribly. It's been a few years so maybe it'll turn out better this time around.
-- Needled stems induce a scarlet coma with flames to burn the scars.  Iv'e never seen a poem written like this before, I'm very very impressed.
 fack. creepy and it works, even though yeah, HAD to be hard to write! what marks are your profs giving you on these, anyway?
 -- "I'm not gonna say anything inspirational; I'm just gonna fucking swear a lot." Billie Joe Armstrong Hint: I might have not been in the most legal of states when I got the idea for this poem lol.
My professor doesn't give grades on each individually, it's kind of a overall, how well did you do in the course. Did you bring in the poems, did they follow the correct formats kind of thing. -- Hello Toilet `poisonedrose - thanks brett <£...ahhh brit love That's a fair way to assess poetry, I think! Its so very subjective and up to personal taste, etc. That's how I would grade, I think. wow. Hey! I did drunk poeming once, and it wasn't too bad either! Granted, mine was FREELY composed, and I can't imagine trying any kind of strict structure!
 -- "I'm not gonna say anything inspirational; I'm just gonna fucking swear a lot." Billie Joe Armstrong oh, lol. I'm 21 now, so that's legal...think way more illegal hahaha.
-- Hello Toilet `poisonedrose - thanks brett <£...ahhh brit love  Whoa, that's GREAT topic for a pantoum! The natural repetitiveness of form lends itself wonderfully to a Carrollean bent. I personally think this came out quite well; you really have the knack for the interplay between the lines. I especially like "the paranoia of movement." Well done!
-- "Oh let me think it is not quite in vain To sigh out sonnets to the midnight air" ~ Keats, "To Hope" |
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