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What You Get for Dating An English Major

for brittney.

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:iconanextraordinarygirl:
is that, "I :heart: words"? :lol: but omg, I sure hope you don't love her yet! :fear: not possible. Infatuation, likely. Love comes later and the test is if it endures time and trials. Be careful! This is an intensely witty piece, sir. ;P I really like it. You're exuberance come across well despite the impressive verbiage ;) this isn't the girl from earlier, the one who "had a boyfriend"?

:heart:

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"I'm not gonna say anything inspirational; I'm just gonna fucking swear a lot." Billie Joe Armstrong
:icondrunken-splice:
no its not the girl who got a boyfriend, she burned out on me...but the thing transitive pictograph verbalizations means symbols that can be used as verbs/words, so in this case I :heart: means I love, and therefore the picture or symbol became a transitive verb. get it? its my english joke lol...but no love is used in there for effect, because if I'm writing such a crazy in depth piece with all these words if I didn't end it with love it would have been awkward... lilke transitive pictograph verbalizations orating that I like you? haha.

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Hello Toilet
`poisonedrose - thanks brett <£...ahhh brit love
:icondrunken-splice:
hahaha isn't it the GREATEST! I saw it online and I started laughing my ass off. I got it and I think its so funny but I always have to explain it to people, and the first day I wore it around campus I could see tons of people trying to read and figure out my shirt. I was cracking up on the inside cause all their faces were like...what the fuck? its amazing

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Hello Toilet
`poisonedrose - thanks brett <£...ahhh brit love
:iconanextraordinarygirl:
ok that makes sense :slow: really good sense, but I think one has to be a little smart to be able to get that right away XD and I see the way you used love in the poem, its exactly right that way. I'm just being nosy about you loving someone too soon. XD omg I'm so nosy today in all my comments!

:heart:

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"I'm not gonna say anything inspirational; I'm just gonna fucking swear a lot." Billie Joe Armstrong
:iconsalshep:
HA! She's a gem, mate. And I want one of those T-shirts.

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LIT NEEDS SOUND

Make A Noise About It Here
:icondrunken-splice:
it's on T-Shirt hell (.com)...and I know, isn't it amazing? I wore it on campus one day and I can't tell you how much I got stares at my shirt while I was walking as people tried to figure it out. a couple of people stopped me and asked what it meant. Only an english nerd such as myself would get that.

My next shirt (in the mail) is a picture of shakespear that says "Prose Before Ho's" hahaha.

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Hello Toilet
`poisonedrose - thanks brett <£...ahhh brit love
:iconqueenhrosie:
Hahahaha. I suppose that is all I have to say for this poem. Also, cool shirt.

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I hear
your voice
down the hall, through the window, above
all those trees, a light
it seems
& you are singing. What song
is that The words
are beautiful.

-LeRoi Jones

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